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you're walking on a tightrope
as thin and as brittle as
gossamer in the cool rain

                               I dare you to

take a barefoot baby step
all misty tundra and wind
lay in a cobweb hammock

                               be all

your afternoon reverie
all your forgotten regrets
you never thought would brighten

                               you dream

of the chances you will take
for it is not an old end--
it is a new beginning;
it is not a winter melt--
but a summer

                              to be
I dare you to be all you dream to be. 

EDIT: I fixed a typo :P

THANK YOU SO SO MUCH, :icongrimface242: FOR FEATURING THIS AS A DD! :love:
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CookieMonster421 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
Lucky butt
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megustagenderbends Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:pointandlaugh:
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AbbyMeyer Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Has a whimsical feel to it, despite the bold message. :)
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poetries Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
This is absolutely amazing. I love how it can be read two ways. :love:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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HoursUponHours Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW! Love the ending. Congrats on the DD!
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Babou-Shka Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Very nice, clever.
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EvranaWolfsong Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is wonderful! I like how you formatted it - it was very effective. It's a very beautiful piece :heart:
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callme007 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
:iconcongratsdd1plz::iconcongratsdd2plz::iconcongratsdd3plz:
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AlwaysRainCheck Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome! Brava Clap 
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